But first
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delaneypalumboEveryone I loves leaves & I write it
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But first

by delaneypalumbo

you broke me. But first you fixed me. You assembled all of my pieces into the perfect puzzle and then shattered me.

You made me cry. But first you made me smile. You gave me endless amounts of joy and then you stole it away from my life.

You hurt me. But first you made me feel wonderful .you gave me a sense of self worth and took it with you when you left.

You scarred me. But you healed me first. You put bandaids on all my wounds and then ripped them off twice as hard.

You made me hate you. But first you made me love you. You were everything I ever wanted and then nothing at all.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
6 months agoReply
This lament you have written is sad and evokes sympathy for the dysfunctional relationship you have described. It causes me to wonder whether this poem in introspective or and indictment of the dysfunctional second person. Well written!!!

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
6 months agoReply
Very wonderful written story! Your way of writing was very unique... keep up the good work!