Moonlight
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daventurousI eat stars for dinner
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A poem about how moonlight acted as a symbol of love and sorrow

Moonlight

by daventurous

The creek nearby dimly shone, Reflecting the glorious moonlight. And we stood on grass alone With our eyes only in sight.

This creek was our favorite place, Even though we know it's gloomy. Yet just seeing your stunning face Makes this creek the creek of beauty

I told you what I felt for you, Also you told me your fondness. We don't have someone for this to view, But the moonlight was our witness.

Problems do occur to us And we tried to stay together, But I know feelings never last. Our forever became never.

I returned to the quiet creek Where I cried all my sadness. I know no one will dare speak And the moonlight was my witness.

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daventurousI eat stars for dinner
a month agoReply
@wakeywakey Thanks for appreciating it. :) I just got the photo here in commaful and I didn't take it.

wakeywakeyCommunity member
2 months agoReply
Touching and Powerful Thank You for sharing! Did you take the cover picture? Thanks

daventurousI eat stars for dinner
a year agoReply
@sydney what you said made me want to make more poems! Thanks! :)

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
i love the symbolize behind everything. i personally love sitting in the moonlight so really loved the imagery and how you connected it with such powerful emotions

daventurousI eat stars for dinner
a year agoReply
@jordan thank you! I appreciated your compliment! I'm glad you liked it! :)

jordanBronze Commai'm moderately cool
a year agoReply
awww this is amazing

daventurousI eat stars for dinner
a year agoReply
@marino thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

marinoBronze Commahehe
a year agoReply
beautiful!