Energy of Time in Me
Energy of Time in Me timetravel stories
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darklyloved
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For the Time Travel Contest.
At the end, it's not supposed to make much sense.

Energy of Time in Me

by darklyloved

Back again where I started.

Oh no.

Dame it.

Too late.

Oh no.

I'm running out of energy.

I can't keep it up.

The clock is breaking.

Time is starting to hate me.

I'm in trouble with death right now.

I just wanted to make it all better.

Fix the mistake I made, that ruined so much.

Time... It'll fix this.

Going back and telling myself not to do it.

To stop the thoughts that flow in my head.

Hmm... If only I knew how to work this properly.

The energy of time that flows through my blood.

Oh no.

Back again. Back...

No sense made...Help

Time/...break/,/@1ing

Mistake.

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5 months agoReply
@tdog16 Thanks

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
5 months agoReply
Oh I forgot what these stories were....but I've read ones written in this format and I don't like them but I enjoyed this one. We got a sense of confusion by confusing us and not getting a sense of placement.

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5 months agoReply
@dissonance @bernardtwindwil Thanks you both so much!!! I'm really happy about how this story turned out. At first I thought it was gonna be weird!

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6 months agoReply
This is absolutely beautiful and very artist. Time is such a precious thing and it goes by so fast, you wrote this very well!! <3

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6 months agoReply
Wow, I loved it. It was written with such skill as to really give the effect that I think of in time theory. Great poem!!!!