All The Good Things For All The Wrong Reasons
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darklylovedDelicately Chaotic
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All The Good Things For All The Wrong Reasons

by darklyloved

"I Love you"

You said to me,

"because your beautiful."

"I need you"

you said to me,

"because you make the others jealous."

You want everything that's beautiful,

but for the wrong reason.

We all have flaws and those are normal, accepted.

Yet there are boundaries,

and they are not crossed because

you'll create hate in the world already full with pain.

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8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Oh, I didn't know that it was the annual suicide season! I didn't even know that was a thing! But it's alright and thanks for the offer of being my mother hen!

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8 months agoReply
@pluzoo Thank you so much!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
I am in awe of your writing. This is the annual suicide season. I would rather apologize than grieve. I am beyond pleased that you are O.K. Keep writing. You can let me know when to be a mother hen.

8 months agoReply
this story is so insightful. i'm really impressed <3 very emotional and powerful

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8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thanks for the compliment! I would like you to know that in reality, I am not experiencing any trauma. A lot of my stories come from stray thoughts, a book I'm writing, or form from another book I'm reading, also some TV shows I watch like Doctor Who. But thank you for your concern, yet again I would like to state that I'm perfectly fine and healthy. =)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
I had to check to see if I had already read this before. Your series of posts has raised several red flags. I spent one of my lifetimes in Emergency nursing and certain behaviors raise my red flags. I am concerned. Do you have someone at home you can talk to about this trauma in your life? I applaud your efforts to sound it out here on commaful. This particular post was hauntingly beautiful. Your writing carries a great depth of emotional and you describe it exquisitely. Great post!!!