dannibear1461Mum, Novice at poetry
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by dannibear1461

Will you take my breath away Or will I be left in dismay It starts with innocent messaging Will it lead to cherishing

Questions bounce back and forth Will I get to see the source You make me laugh, smile But will it just last a while

Random quips full of wit But you ain't no Brad Pitt Look beyond the outer shell I am wondering will we gel

We get along so far so good So let it not be misunderstood Things blossom from strange things But at the moment nothing stings

Let's sit a while and get to know Exactly if this will go Into a friendship Into a relationship

But stay a while You make me smile

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you so much for your praise , I write about my thoughts and feelings of a situation and experience. It is just who I am and to receive such praise is overwhelming, thank you again :)

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a year agoReply
@dannibear As I was wandering through these posts I was wondering which one I would like the most. So many put their life on line. But very few make it so fine. Needless to say, I love heroic couplets. This is the reply your wonderful poem gets. I loved the message as well as the medium. You need to be proud of you craftsmanship of the English language.