The Meeting
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dannibear1461
dannibear1461Mum, Novice at poetry
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Meeting someone new and the excitement/feelings it stirs up within you

The Meeting

by dannibear1461

Your eyes so dark There is a spark A locked embrace Feel my heart race

Temperatures rise What a surprise For this is all new I can't get enough of you

Your gentle touch I yearn for so much kisses on my skin I quiver within

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dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil you've hit the nail on the head. The things that aren't communicated but that are expressed instead

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@dannibear1461 The Meeting captures that electrical resonance for two people. Volumes can be written on the spiritual and cerebral aspects of love. They amount to nothing in my opinion without that va-va-voom that you described so well. Nothing joins two people like that magical lip lock.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I write from the heart on how I feel, for me it's innocent, about meeting someone new and when they stroke your face, the embrace, the kiss, having that connection with them for the first time , it continues the excitement of that kiss

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Oh...you dirty, dirty girl. This was expressive and libidinous. Your rhyme and meter were immaculate. This was voluptuous, yet it was pure in its expression of the excitement of that "certain something" that two people have. Magical poem.