My pen...
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dannibear1461Mum, Novice at poetry
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My pen...

by dannibear1461

I write from my heart That's how I start All I've lived through To share with you

I opened up Let you in This was just a sin

The mocks came My heart pained One of taunts Which just haunts

Writing in verse Soon became a curse All the while Criticised for style

Lacking sharpness Became a darkness No longer wanting to write Of my insight

Put down my pen Find my zen Try again Someday...

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dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I know , I'm very lucky

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
@dannibear1461 That is a precious gem you have there.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you , yes agreed I could do with a thicker hide. Of course I would never stop it is my passion, as I said on e before one day maybe to eventually publish ... dreams and I'm following mine I promise!!!! Yes my eldest gave the the stern word "mum did you know Lionel messi was bullied and look at him know!" From a 14 that hit home!! Thank you again x

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
Remember this, Danielle, any moron can find a fault and criticize. It takes someone experienced and knowledgeable to be able to examine your writing and tell you what you are doing right. We have to convert some of that fire in your belly into a thick hide. I love your writing dearly. I admire the wordsmith that you are. I want you to also remember that you write for you and those who call you, "Mum", and I will bet that they are not complaining. You have unique experiences that you can share and the talent to do it in an artistic manner. Great poem!!!!

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
8 months agoReply
@LostInMyDreams thank you so much. It is my passion. It was written as we all receive criticism for what we love and not all understand that. If people were to hold there tongue more then the world would be a better place to me. That is what I was trying to portray in this how it affects us all. Thank you so much I will keep writing as I love creating verses, much love and thank you for your support ❤️

LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
8 months agoReply
Beautiful poem. I hope you keep writing. I like your work.