Lust
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dannibear1461Mum, Novice at poetry
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Lust

by dannibear1461

Stay a while You make me smile Sit beside me You interest me

You take your time You seem to shine A gleam in your eye I'd like to know why

You amuse But confuse Delight but excite All rolled into one This could be fun

What do you hide Is there something inside Is it of lost love Was she your turtle dove

You've got your twinkle back There appears nothing black Are you tainted Or can we get aquatinted

There is a fire in your eyes To my surprise Let it unleash passion Pure satisfaction

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dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
10 months ago
Insecure

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
9 months ago
Short verse

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year ago
Distant ...



dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil you are spot on with that assumption

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@dannibear1461 May I be so bold as to suggest that heroic couplets are probably also how you think about ideas that you find personally meaningful.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil again thank you for your praise I love couplets it's how I write about all things.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Just delightful!!! I love the way you manipulate our thoughts by a clever usage of words. The iambic pentameter in heroic couplet is nearly a lost art. You are an artist. I found myself chuckling out loud as I read through it. The light-hearted examination of a deep subject is refreshing. I loved this effort.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@chromium thank you so much :)

chromiumSilver CommaI like to think I'm amazing
a year agoReply
beautiful!