Lost
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dannibear1461Mum, Novice at poetry
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Lost

by dannibear1461

Having a big heart can be blessing or a curse You can be loved unconditionally or your feelings dispersed

You can be smiling on the outside Harbouring pain on the inside Look happy, content a sight to admire All the while inside, engulfed with the flames of fire

Confident merry a joy to be around But deep inside so lost and yet unfound People's perceptions can be quite fallacious They don't see the inner pulchritudinous

Look deeper at the person you envision Your eyes can distort your vision But loving someone so freely with a heart so pure Never expecting anything back that's for sure

We are all complex creatures all unique So why is it love we seek ?

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dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil @chromium thank you both I think I am a pessimistic romantic but need to , edit more :) but practice makes perfect and one day I will master this

chromiumSilver CommaI like to think I'm amazing
a year agoReply
really well done!!!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Another lilting poem that strikes so deep within us. Your craftsmanship is magnificent. But your ideation exceeds even that description. The are lovely poems you write. Thye are sort of like Emily Dickinson on steroids​.