Distant ...
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dannibear1461Mum, Novice at poetry
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Distant ...

by dannibear1461

You say all the right things Perfect timings Stroke my face Long embrace

Hold me close Say I mean the most Something's wrong Your heart is beating to another song

Absent and cold No longer wishing to hold Instead distant Nothing consistent

Confused, dismayed You've gone astray With another No longer my lover

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dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year ago
All about me.....

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
9 months ago
Desire...

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
8 months ago
Fireflies...



dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@wethedreamers thank you for your comment , I'm glad it touched you.

wethedreamersCommabassadorAnd we're a million miles away.
a year agoReply
This broke my heart.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I agree with your comment wholeheartedly

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Thank you for finding the time for a new poem. This was delicious. Allow me one small quibble please. Second stanza, fourth line, do you think you could say the same thing, same rhyme but with fewer syllables? Great poem.