Lilah

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Hi!! Feedback is welcomed on my posts!!



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Lilah . 4 years ago
Her Crayons
A little girl with something to protect, but she has to live with it now that it's broken... I accept all and any criticism!!
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Lilah . 4 years ago
Don't fret little boy
This is a really really rough draft so please let me know what you think I should change or what you like about it! Let me know if it is confusing as well. My goal for this was for the poem to be abou...
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Lilah . 4 years ago
State of Mind
A poem about the endless train of thoughts that night brings.
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Lilah . 4 years ago
Just a Girl
Don't hold back! Please give constructive criticism, I appreciate it!! This is a poem about how women are treated. I'm not sure if this is the title I will keep so if you have suggestions feel free to...
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Lilah . 4 years ago
Help
Short poem about someone being lost. Please leave advice and feedback!!
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Lilah . 4 years ago
Identity
A poem about depression. Please leave feedback!!
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Lilah . 4 years ago
My message for you
A short poem about a one sided connection. Constructive criticism is welcomed!!
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