Foggy Vision
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cjhaleTeen Charlotte Hale, call me Charlie.
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Fog

Foggy Vision

by cjhale

I have foggy vision.

I can't see straight.

Lost in my choices and decisions.

I just sit and wait.

Where do I go from here?

The silence is consuming.

I can't face my fear.

I can't even see it moving.

I have foggy vision.

And it is surrounding me.

The silence is violent.

And it's all I see.

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chaoticteensa confused teenager in a big, big world
10 months agoReply
this is beautiful. I love it :)

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10 months agoReply
I really loved this

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
This was an interesting take on the allegory of fog. You did a great job both wording it and illustrating this thought process. Did you know that in the Namib fog is the only way some flora and fauna receive any moisture at all? Great poem!!!