cjhaleTeen Charlotte Hale, call me Charlie.
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Feelings are a roller coaster.


by cjhale


1. The general state of consciousness considered independently of particular sensations, thoughts, ect. 2. An emotion or emotional perception or attitude.

Sometimes I don't have any feeling.

My body, my mind, is numb. I'm empty of all emotion, a hollow shell.

And other times my feelings surge around me, a thunderstorm.

They consume me, and drain me, and grab and pull and yank and tear. They claw at my heart and gnaw at my sanity.

But sometimes they are good feelings.

Warm, bright, and happy. Calm. Silly. Loving. All the good stuff that mends your heart, and calms the storm.

And those are the feelings I love the most.

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so true. indeed a roller coaster that you depicted so well!

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I absolutely love the way you personified your feelings. It was a very interesting twist that captures the readers imagination. Very well done!

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You did an excellent job of describing the feeling of feeling. The definition was a great idea. Yet I spent a lifetime being emotionally detached from my own work. I loved this poem

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It's nice to have feelings we need to experience all aspects of life it's just the people who play with our feelings that sets our lives adrift nice story