Hold On
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chissjacksA writer with a big heart.
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Suicide is an answer, but is it the right one?

Hold On

by chissjacks

Whatever you do...

Don't let go.

Don't give in to despair.

This life is full of good...

And evil.

I know that you wonder...

If it's Hell on Earth.

To live is to die.

To die is to live.

Death is a shot away.

Soon, everything will be alright.

My darling, please ignore these lies.

Don't listen to Suicide's lullabies.

Come back to me.

My loving arms are open.

If you go....

Do you know where you're going?

Are you certain that you're ready to meet Death?

You've wounded me by saying nobody cares for you.

One person cares for you.

I can dry your tears.

My words...

And my actions...

Can snuff your fears.

Turn away from the dark.

Come back to life's light.

Murdering yourself will not save you.

It will damn you.

Love yourself again.

It will heal you.

Even though you can't always see it.

There's a sunrise every morn.

Chaos is a part of life.

Suffering through it will make you stronger.

I know that you can do it.

You've made it this far, after all!

Don't be ashamed of your tears...

For, they make you human.

Sob in my arms tonight.

I will hold you tight.

Whatever you do....

Hold on.

Everything will be alright.

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5 months agoReply
@michaelschulze absolutely beautiful comment! Stay strong my friend, you will always be loved.

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5 months agoReply
@jayjenjackson Thank you. 😊

5 months agoReply
This was 👍🏾

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5 months agoReply
@tdog16 simply amazing! thanks for making me come across this story!

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5 months agoReply
@michaelschulze Thank you, I hope they do too.

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5 months agoReply
@nightcanary thank you!

5 months agoReply
Having faught my own mind for all of my life i know only to well what you are trying to convey is it really wrong to want to go home for those suffering short term Definitely don't even contemplate the idea i still live my life balanced on a knifes edge only love will push you in the wright direction Great piece i hope many find comfort in your words

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5 months agoReply
Beautifully written, I love your choice of words and the message behind this!!

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5 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Lol. This is probably the most interesting comment I've gotten on Commaful. Thanks for it, it means a lot.

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5 months agoReply
This is the only answer that I know for thoughts of self-destruction. You wrote this as if your ink-quill was from the wing of an angel. The thought, love, and the skill that went into this was exquisitely beautiful. You totally blew me out of the water with this work of art and humanity. Great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!