Affliction
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childstarOne word prompts || Wattpad: @child-star
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The pain of a break up

Affliction

by childstar

You are a constant reminder

Of what could have been

Those long nights we spent

Laid back in the grass

Talking about a future

That will never happen

Now the starry nights are silent

Your voice no longer rings through my mind

There is only emptiness

Within the chambers of my heart

Where you once were

The sadness, the ache, the longing

To be back by your side

Missing you is my greatest affliction

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marfachstoryteller of the Irish variety.
3 months agoReply
Liked this a lot ~

justshutupxdBronze CommaA writer making the world brighter
4 months agoReply
This resonates with so many of us. The way it's written helps show the pain felt by the author and helps the audience connect. Keep up the good work. :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
4 months agoReply
This was sensitively written. Your word choice evoked empathy rather than sympathy. I know what you mean about break ups. 60 years ago in high school, I would get dumped by a girl at least once a week. What a bummer. That is why I had so many at the same time. Society just doesn't seem the same. Great post!!!