the creation
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the creation

by cheungfio

i can see just who you're , you're the missing part , the only living boi left in the world but i wonder what the world has done to you .

i see you walking down the fifth avenue seeking for salvation in a girl but if you get what you receive , it comes down to what you believe . but do you believe you're someone she can love

life is like a loaded gun pointed at the lonely ones , do you think the final bullet will be enough

i know who you want to be , you want to be a good company but everything you say gets turned around ,so you decide to be alone

you disconnect your telephone and decide to go to places where you can never be found

we all know that everyone needs a friend , but who will you love in the end and can you be somebody they can trust

change your mind and change your life , go out there and find yourself a pretty wife and be a man untill you turn to dust

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a year ago
Sleepless

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a year ago
NOBODY'S FOOL

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a year ago
If everyone cared



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10 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil if only i can hve someone like that besides me

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@cheungfio I understand. That is why I give my written work to this extremely critical censor, my wife, before I publish.

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil in most cases i dont even like reading through what ive already written , hope you understand me

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I loved this message. You wrote a powerful message of hope. It was more a directive for happiness than a poem or an essay. Proofread before you post. That is the only advice I have to give you. Your thoughts are magnificent. Great work.