Hey guys, here's a poem I wrote the same day I saw this girl for the first time, needless to say what I feel for her hahaha.
Give me your feedbacks on how I could get better please because I'm not that good for the moment! It looks so mainstream to me but it's really what I felt this day.
Deep oblivion and piercing light,
Legend says I'll feel alright,
Eyes like light blue pearls,
Oceans contained in such small spheres.
Dangerous waters indeed,
So many ships have been wrecked havoc,
Just to get a glimpse at these earrings;
She's the purest thought I've ever had
The purest need I've ever felt
Let me just unravel your hair
As I watch you fall asleep on my laps
Caress your soft skin
Through the cold of a winter's night
Let's watch the rain as it's falling down
Foolish love and asinine lover
I wish for the same that I give
I miss you, even though you don't know me
I love you, even if you don't see me.