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burniingaschs
burniingaschsI love stories, games, and sleep. :)
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... We must use word carefully

Words

by burniingaschs

Words

So beautiful, so sweet. If said in just the right way they make a wonderful melody.

With words, I could connect to you.

At that moment we first meet, at a time before I knew you, at a time you didn't know me. I could make that first connection, and our friendship could begin to be.

With words, I could get to know you.

My words could spin the tales, I could tell you all about myself, and you with me as well. We could speak of all our missions, the ones that succeeded or failed..

We could speak of all our dreams, of those thoughts we kept to ourselves.

With words, I could tell you.

About a world no ones ever seen. I could paint a picture, of those secrets that I keep. I could explain to you my wishes, I could share with you my doubts..

We could become so close together, we'd know each other inside and out.

...

Words...

So painful, so sweet. Able to lift you up... Or bring you to your knees.

With words, I could hurt you.

Like a finely sharpened blade, my words could cut through you. My words could bring you pain.

With words, I could lie to you.

I could trick you into belief. I could cause you so much suffering, with words so sickeningly sweet.

I could weave a careful web, trapping not only you but me.

With words, I could beg you.

To forgive me for what I've done. To allow me to show you, that I know I'm in the wrong. But I know that once I've hurt you, once I've used that blade...

Words are not so easily forgiven, though they're easy enough to say.

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riverfr0zenBronze Commawriter, programmer, photographer?
6 months agoReply
So glad that you have brought the power of words into the light. Words are, indeed, so powerful, and must be handled with respect.

jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
6 months agoReply
OMG THIS IS A GREAT ONE! GREAT JOB! :)

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
6 months agoReply
And that is why the pen is mightier than the sword! Well written and great insight!!

burniingaschsBronze CommaI love stories, games, and sleep. :)
6 months agoReply
@tdog16 lol, Thank you so much!

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
6 months agoReply
OMG 😲 THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD!!! You had so much truth in your words(😂 Oh my) about words. You wrote something so inspirational with such beauty! I LOVED it!!!

davoriteCommabassador-̗̀there's bravery in being soft ̖́-
6 months agoReply
The rhythm of this piece was fascinating, and kept me hanging onto the words you are about to say next. Keep up the good work!

burniingaschsBronze CommaI love stories, games, and sleep. :)
6 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Yes, and I very much enjoyed reading it.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
6 months agoReply
Really dear one,did you notice that my review was a rhyme dedicated to your beautiful work?

burniingaschsBronze CommaI love stories, games, and sleep. :)
6 months agoReply
@LostInMyDreams Thank you. You've perfectly summed up what I was trying to say.

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6 months agoReply
So much truth here. Words can be so many different things. The explanation of how beautiful words are in a positive light. Then transitioning to the opposite. How painful they can be. How much damage words can do. Then finally concluding with how little weight words begin to carry once they have been used the in the ways you described. Great post!!