What She Was to Me.
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burniingaschsI love stories, games, and sleep. :)
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What She Was to Me.

by burniingaschs

She was one of a kind.

I'd never known anyone quite like her.

She got on my nerves.

She was the only one who always seemed to say the things that got under my skin.

She loved everything.

She had so much love and she was always so eager to share it.

She was beautiful.

Not the kind of superficial beauty that goes away with time, she was beautiful on the inside and anyone who knew her, knew of her beauty.

She loved me.

And gave me her love every day, even when I didn't give her mine.

She was precious to me.

I wasn't very good at expressing how I felt, but I knew she knew I loved her.

She was constant.

She was there when life became too much for me, and She may be the only reason I'm still here.

I didn't see it coming.

There was no sign, no warning, it was over before I even knew what happened.

She died....

And I couldn't help but wonder why.

She left me...

She didn't do it on purpose, but I still felt upset about her abrupt exit from my life.

It is impossible to explain the pain I feel.

There are no words for the feelings I have now that she is gone.

She wont be replaced.

There is no one who could ever replace her, and even if there was I wouldn't want them to. She will forever be a precious memory.

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@izal5416 Thank you. I really appreciate it. There really isn't an accurate way to describe those kinds of things.

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a year agoReply
Your sister? That's... all I can say is that I couldn't imagine life without my sister. This is one of those moments when I don't want to say too much or too little, or something that doesn't accurately describe exactly what I'm thinking. I'm truly sorry, even though it's probably what everyone says, I mean it.

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a year agoReply
I've lost some important people in my life, and your story has made me go back in time. It's beautiful and close to our scars. But it says what we're not willing to say ourselves. We usually just bottle it all in and act like we're okay. You just showed that we don't have to. Thank you for this story.

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a year agoReply
@burlingaschs Beautiful poem and illustration, You reached out and took my pathos and molded it. It brought memories of my female dog. I had her for 22 years. Her death has made me incomplete. You just wrote a poem that is everything I wanted to say about her. Thank you.

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@pops, yeah I lost my sister in March so it was based off her.

a year agoReply
so beautiful. did something that happened inspire this :( reminds me of a lot of ppl

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a year agoReply
aww <3 thanks for sharing this

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a year agoReply
awww :( that took a quick turn.... :( <3