with closed eyes

brzqLying is an art.
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago

with closed eyes

by brzq

i love you

with my eyes closed

because every time I look at you and you don't look back my heart stops my soul hurts

you love me

with your eyes open

like you love a friend a sister but certainly not a lover

I guess I hurt more but at least I get to see you smile.

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