I Forgive You
I Forgive You randomness stories

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This was written for day two of the contest, and it's way better than day one's story (but it's kinda cheesy). This format was inspired by the most famous story on Commaful. Enjoy!

I Forgive You

Hey! You don't understand how glad I am to see you. I forgive you.

Why are you crying? I'm obviously fine.

Hello? Can't you hear me? Wait. Am... Is that me?

On that hospital bed?

Oh no. This is not good. I guess I'm not fine.

I... Feel fine, though. Weightless. Like I have no body.

I see my body lying there, lifeless. I don't understand. How can I see this?

Why am I bothering to ask you? You obviously can't hear me.

I... I'm sorry for putting you under so much stress.

Once - no, if - I get out of this, I'll make it up to you, I promise.

This is all my fault. I'm so sorry.

Where are you going? Don't leave me!

I need you! Please, don't lose hope. You're the only thing I have left.

I know I can make it through this. I promise you that I will.

Please. Just stay with me. Give me hope.

Oh, thank God. You didn't leave.

Without you here I wouldn't bother trying to survive.

I... I can't feel my body, but I can see I should be in a lot of pain.

Don't worry, I don't feel it.

What are you doing near that outlet?

That's... That's my ventilator plug, don't touch that!

Please. Don't do this to me. You're my best friend.

You wouldn't kill me, would you?

I know I can make it out of this. I promise you.

I've never broken a promise, have I?

Please, stop crying. You're making it harder for me.

I know I can make it. Just wait and see.

I know it hurts you to be doing this.

So why are you?

Give me one more chance. One more day.

Isn't that what friends are for? Second chances?

Is this how much you value me as a friend?

Keep in mind, if you do this, my blood is on your hands.

How will you live with yourself?

How do you think I feel about this?

Oh, no. Please don't cry like that. Please.

I'm so sorry. Don't blame yourself for this. It's my fault for jaywalking.

It was your first driving lesson. You were bound to make at least one mistake.

I forgive you.

Forget about me. I'm just a burden.

All I'll do is hold you down, physically and emotionally.

I was a fool for thinking I'd make it out of this alive.

Pull the plug.

End the pain and suffering that I should be feeling.

It's for the best.

Stop crying like that, please.

I forgive you.

Move on. It's too late to tell you how much you love me.

I love you too.

All it takes is one pull of the plug.

I forgive you.


Oh, that wasn't bad at all!

I feel... Even lighter than before.

I'm enraptured! This euphoria!

Thank you so much for letting me go.

I forgive you.

Please forgive yourself, too.

I'm in a better place now.

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