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brigitakeryt
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Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago
When They say life is gonna be all ups, They condemn us to the cage of all downs. Once You see the true colors of life, it's sadness and agony, only then can You experience delight.

Free

by Bri

They told me we are free,

They said our hearts are lightened.

And yet, all people that I meet,

Just scream and shout in darkness.

They smiled while lying to my face,

They made me weak and fearful.

But now I'm out of this little cage,

And I can feel the freedom.

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a year agoReply
@venice @bernardtwindwil Thank You so much for your kind words. It means a lot to me.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was so well put together with the wording matching the visuals. This was excellent. The meter kept it rhythmically running through each stanza.

veniceBronze Commaur mami
a year agoReply
very very powerful message. the images and the words you chose gives this piece a more magical spirit.

tankI'm a tank. yep
a year agoReply
freeeedommm.....knowledge can indeed lead to freedom!