The Gravedigger
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This is an attempt at an Onomatopoeia Poem.

The Gravedigger

by BookGirl

The gravedigger shovels the wet earth onto the grave,

Grunt, Spit, Sigh

He pauses, as he hears noises from the hole that don't belong,

Moan, Scratch, Sob

He shovels faster to cover the horrible sounds,

Pant, Scream, Wail

But he realizes the sounds are not in the hole,

But behind him.

"Why did you leave me down there?"

Thud.

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tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
7 months agoReply
@sydney yes it's working now thanks!

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7 months agoReply
@BookGirl @tdog16 we just fixed the comment scroll up issue, which hopefully will solve the bug you guys experienced. let me know if it works now!

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7 months agoReply
@tdog16 @BookGirl hey guys!! so sorry about the issues. what kind of mobile devices are you on? the pages show okay for me both on computer and phone if i don't go to the comments section. Try going to the link directly: https://commaful.com/play... and then going through it. There is a bug where clicking the up arrow from the comments messes things up a bit. That could be it? We're going to work on the fix for that. Let me know if that fixes it! Sorry again!

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
7 months agoReply
@BookGirl I have tried but I will try again...hopefully it works:) thanks!

BookGirlGifted WriterFangirl+Reader+Writer+Maniac=Me
7 months agoReply
@tdog16 I'm just guessing, but it might depend on the device you're viewing Commaful on. It's more glitchy on my phone, and it doesn't show the last slides on there. But on the computer, everything seems to be shown and working alright. So, maybe try a different device?

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
7 months agoReply
@sydney I am not able to see any of @bookgirls last slides....do you think that you could help?

BookGirlGifted WriterFangirl+Reader+Writer+Maniac=Me
7 months agoReply
@tdog16 The last slide said "Thud". Like the sound of something falling. In this case, a body.

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
7 months agoReply
What did the last slide say?