The First End
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The First End

by BookGirl

Life has many "firsts":

First breath, First love, First wiggly tooth, First--, well just about anything.

But, people don't think about the "lasts":

Last sunset, Last conversation with your father, Last heard laughter, Last time you close your eyes.

So, you see, there's always a "first" and a "last"

Like a beginning and an end. A start and finish. That about describes life, doesn't it?

But on those rare days, when I'm not thinking about "lasts",

But instead of "firsts", I like to think that maybe, just maybe,

When the world finally fades away,

And you've had all of your "lasts" That this is only Truly

The First End

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil You're welcome. I think many people have lost the sense of true emotion. At least a few of us still got it.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@bookgirl It was the power of your verse combined with my memories of long fallen comrades that choked me up. That is a good thing. It is good to know you can still feel. I thank you for that . You are adorable.

BookGirlGifted WriterFangirl+Reader+Writer+Maniac=Me
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you again. I'm sorry that I made you upset. I usually apologize since I never mean to make my readers cry. I know it should be a good thing, that I'm bringing out emotion in people, but I still feel bad. I hope you lived a life you won't regret, sir. And I hope you don't leave too soon. I think the world needs a kind soul like yours to brighten it up.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
You got me on this one. Staggeringly beautiful words and meter. The visuals were stunning. I am so near my "First end" that I am now in a hurry. I actually choke up and my eyes misted.