Tragedy and root beer floats
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bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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This is a take on reality horror.

Tragedy and root beer floats

by bernardtwindwil

The car

I went cruising the town All windows down Radio up on KAFY Rock n Roll warm summer night Lookin' for girls feelin' alright

The park

At first glimpse, I wasn't sure a girl Running in the darkened park toward my car I slowed my mind awhirl She hopped in there in the dark Panting and crying her eyes were wide

The girl

Hysteria reigned on my right side She was disheveled and bruised But a very pretty sight So off we cruised No questions asked

The offer

I asked her if she wanted to snack I drove to my fav burger shack I ordered us burgers and fries Two root beer floats two apple pies

The talk

We ate and drove as we talked She laughed a said she was glad I was there or she'd have walked Apparently her boyfriend was mad

The shot

I pulled out on the main drag Smokin' my tires grinnin' like hell My rear window shattered like mad Blood in her root beer I sarted to yell

The end

Her boyfriend had shot her twice in my rod one the rootbeer the other her bod

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
@emilyegan Thank you. I am much opposed to the concept of ownership of another human being.

emilyeganwe all interpret life in our own ways
8 months agoReply
a beautifully executed story of injustice that a man thought he was entitled to someone else. loved it!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
@ApoLLo Thank you. I appreciate that you get the point I am trying to make. This is a real horror. It has been happening forever when one gender or another objectifies their romantic attachmen ts and see the other one as a piece of property.

ApoLLoTrying out some writing :)
10 months agoReply
People like that boyfriend need help. It's awesome that you give light to these occurrences. :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
@erofaer Thank you. This is fictional but unfortunately it is taking place in some of our urban areas.

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10 months agoReply
You tell stories so wonderfully in the form of poetry. I loved reading this one :)