The unfriend
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bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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The unfriend

by bernardtwindwil

I've been unfriended!

A pledge suspended?

My world upended?

Am I offended?

Can it be mended?

Was it intended?

A love transcended?

What hell descended?

Satan befriended?

Taunt unintended?

Our love expended?

Was love pretended?

Insult contended?

Was miscomprehended?

How is this ended?

I don't give a shit!

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a year ago
lubdub....lubdub....lubdub

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year ago
Him



6 months agoReply
Having ree read this poem for at least the sixth time i just love your choice of words but the ending always brightens up my day it's a good little pick up when you're down

ginaschultzstill searching for my purpose
a year agoReply
I have way too much love for this

a year agoReply
Perfect , " was love pretended " the question that keeps us wondering ..... I really loved this poem

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I can't tell you how glad I am to be back on commaful and talking with you.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@erofaer Thank you. The last line is an important ingredient for a happy life.

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a year agoReply
You're brilliant! I love this.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@jessmackin There are so many more things to care about than being unfriended. I hoped by humor I could reduce its importance to young poets.

jessmackinMuch nerdiness
a year agoReply
Very interesting look at some reactions to being unfriended in brilliant rhymes, followed by the most usual response, love it!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@wethedreamers Thank you for your cackle.

wethedreamersGifted WriterAnd we're a million miles away.
a year agoReply
I cackled out loud. :)