The final battle
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bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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The final battle

by bernardtwindwil

Green tracers forgotten no longer nigh

The katyusha rockets no longer fly

Desperate patients no longer cry

He knows how but no longer why

His hands​ shake he no longer trys

The sails are limp and no longer ply

His body's wrecked and no longer spry

The pan is cold will no longer fry

Heart of an eagle but no longer eye

His rope and powder are no longer dry

The last battle just dies no longer wins

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I actually have the last verse engraved on the bla...



a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I wish you all the health , love and happiness in the world

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@ameagami Thank you It is like my obituary.

a year agoReply
Powerful and emotional , outstanding

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a year agoReply
@poppyruthsilver Thank you

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a year agoReply
Excellent, emotive and moved me deeply...

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@nitasmith @Noi @apexpredator Thank you all so much. I am humbled by your comments

a year agoReply
Aaah.. Great poetry.. Well done

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a year agoReply
this is way too amazing, i felt my heart in my throat while reading it. wonderful mate :) !!!

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a year agoReply
this is a wonderful poem! the rhyme scheme is so simple but so elegant!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@KatieFlemmings Thanks