Pick-up lines
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bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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Pick-up lines

by bernardtwindwil

Pick-up lines

Nice rig man he was startin' to stare I hope to pass it on to an heir

Pick-up lines

Four doors, tow package, and four wheel drive It'll last as long as I am alive

Pick-up lines

Big turbo diesel with full-length bed I'll drive this truck until I am dead

Pick-up lines

It takes me out to hunt and to fish That sure is on my last bucket wish

Pick-up lines

It 'll tow a load in the mountains high It's a place to rest until I die

Pick-up lines

I have to get a boost in the truck This dadburn disease has run amok

Pick-up lines

I need to trade it in on a van That is all part of my final plan

Pick-up lines

I have never not had a pick-up I am sure no longer just a pup

Pick-up lines

That pickup will no longer be here Because now I'll be needing a bier

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a year agoReply
@carolineprancke Thank you. Never underestimate the depth of passion of a man for his truck.

a year agoReply
It was really interesting the way you commanded several couplets and turned it into a story. Very well-planned! Plus the title is extremely eye-catching and fun, after reading the poem.

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a year agoReply
@emmeliarocheste @lentis Thank you for reading. You will find when you get into the sunset years that sharing your losses lightens the impact. Being able to stand among future giants of literature is humbling and wonderful.

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a year agoReply
This was so wholesome to read! I wasn't expecting it, but I really liked the turn this took! It's well written and the rhyming scheme is well thought out! This was a great poem!

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a year agoReply
hahahaha this totally threw me off