IS THIS ME?
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ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
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i can't seem to find me anywhere. have anybody seen it?

IS THIS ME?

by ayathalboon

reading books & listening to specific music types

is this me or am i copying someone"s mind?

wearing this and saying that

is this me or i have a WHOLE ME to find?

Thinking of these things,making friendship with these people

is this me or my mind is going totally blind?

loving things and acting this way

is this me or there is someone's life standing behind?

please someone help me

there is me that i can't truly find nor hide

i am caged

i am caged by everyone's lives i can't seem to act myself at any time

i need to free my thoughts

i want be me, but where is that key? without it, i can't open my cage i can't free my mind

will you be there?

will you be there to help me and support me? i hope you will stay always kind its not easy to search for myself it has been lost for a very long time

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ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
a year ago
Its Hard Enough Alone
i hope you like it! thank you!

ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
a year ago
Grateful and everyhting

ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
a year ago
Dear Friend,
that is what i miss the most, even if i am not old...



ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil i am so pleased that you got to read and understand every bit of this, whatever you call it. i hope i can find it soon and when i find it, i will immediately write another one. thanks for encouraging me to search for myself!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Your use of the graphics enhanced the written word immensely. The verse fits like a jigsaw puzzle illustrating the whole truth once you put it together. I think you have touched on a deep truth held by all young people. I don't know when it happens but eventually, you will find you and become best friends.

ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
a year agoReply
@bob now i am really in peace that i am not alone feeling this and i am really happy that it is kind of a normal thinggg

ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
a year agoReply
@jeremiah thank youu!

ayathalboonBEGINNER WRITER
a year agoReply
@sydney most of the time i think of everything i am doing, i don't know if its what i really want or not and it frustrates me!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
i feel this alot. Am I doing something because it's what others want me to do? Or is it because that's what they do in the movies? Or is it what I really want?

a year agoReply
i will be there and you will be there!

bobBronze CommaAll hail BOB
a year agoReply
Aww. This is something I often feel