Hesitant love
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ashleyehet
ashleyeheti'm 90% sure i'm lost in your eyes
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I'm honestly not sure if any of this makes sense. I was originally going for something like a "friends with benefit" feel, but I'm positive it didn't turn out that way. It's too early in the morning right now, but enjoy^^

Hesitant love

by ashleyehet

I'm 90 percent sure I'm lost in your gaze.

The way your eyes crinkle and shine each time you laugh at my tasteless jokes reflect a good life, and I cannot stop myself from falling into the bittersweet aroma of love.

You taste like recycled coffee and poorly stifled laughs,

And I feel myself wanting more and more of you every moment we're in bed together, sheets cinched haphazardly around our legs to hold us captive for just a kiss more.

There is just something about you I can't explain.

The moment you waltzed into the grocer's with those long, uncoordinated limbs, I knew something was different. Maybe it was your smile. Maybe it was the way you shined.

You're a muse, a motivation.

Each kiss sends me soaring into a dream of inspiration, and as we finish our private love, the high leaves me gasping at the edge of each sentence as I try to comprehend the emotions you cause.

I'm 90 percent sure I'm lost in your gaze,

but I can't tell if it's just me trying to see if you believe this could be real.

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ashleyeheti'm 90% sure i'm lost in your eyes
a year ago
Summer
This is the first part of a new series.

mariamstoriesFollow me on instagram @mariam.stories
2 months ago
He called me cute.
I heard cute, he heard naive.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months ago
Hunting
This is for you Dad. This tale that has been told...



ashleyeheti'm 90% sure i'm lost in your eyes
a year agoReply
@pluto ah, thank you!! ^^

ashleyeheti'm 90% sure i'm lost in your eyes
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil you're so kind, thank you so much ; w ;

plutoCommabassadorPlanets man
a year agoReply
awww this is adorable and sweet!!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was sensitive and charming. The descriptions are vivid. Thr free verse had that fluidity common to good writing. The use of 90% was charming . If you have a 90% level of confidence, you're doing well.

ashleyeheti'm 90% sure i'm lost in your eyes
a year agoReply
@venice thank you ; u ;

veniceBronze Commaur mami
a year agoReply
ahh this was a very very sweet piece. your writing is beauty, love!