where did you lose your smile, Eleanor?
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asesari
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Eleanor is her, him or maybe you but Eleanor is not bad, Eleanor is just lost.

where did you lose your smile, Eleanor?

by asesari

yesterday, i saw you at the park we met once, Eleanor

you were sad, your head was down, and your tears were falling down

you will have gone by midnight, Eleanor

i won't be there for the last farewell and i hear you say 'well...' but tell me, will this world be able to see your smile, again?

i will always remember your smile, Eleanor

it is the most beautiful thing i have ever seen and it will never be seen again i am so sorry for this, Eleanor

this breaks my heart, Eleanor

you are so cruel because i need your smile but there's nothing i can do how ironic, Eleanor

think of me twice after you leave, Eleanor

twice is enough i can't want more, but if you give more, i will be glad Eleanor

where did you lose your smile, Eleanor?

asking this question, i prayed it wouldn't be the man you loved deeply but it was him, the place you lost your smile is his heart but what about my heart poor thing...

bye bye, Eleanor

there won't be any hugs but a kiss from far, far away and a bliss, hoped by me bye bye, Eleanor i will never forget your smile

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asesariBronze Commahelp the earth
9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil It would be awesome, thanks for the idea! But shortly, Eleanor is a lonely woman, she wants attention but she die alone, Father McKenzie is the one who lives with loneliness, he is used to it. That's my perspective but i will definitely try to explain this beautiful song with poetry.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
@asesari Churchill was talking about Eleanor Roosevelt. Eleanor of Aquitaine was a partial archetype for Eleanor Rigby. Tell us sometime via poetry how Eleanor became so deeply special. to you.

asesariBronze Commahelp the earth
9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil @darklyloved Thank you, thank you so much for all the beautiful words you said for this poem! As a huge Beatles fan, using the name Eleanor is special for me. I am really glad that you liked this because it was from a deep place in my heart

darklylovedCommabassadorDelicately Chaotic
9 months agoReply
This poem was beautiful. It broke my heart slowly with every letter that made a word. It makes me want to find Eleanor and tell her everything will be alright even though it might not be. I love it.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
Winston Churchill once said, "Eleanor, Eleanor...Goddamn Eleanor." This was wonderfully well written I loved the way you sculpted your words around this theme. Great poem!!!