when... when stories

asesarihelp the earth
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago
I thought about 'when's for my first story.
*English isn't my native language. I apologize for every mistake I made and I will make.*


by asesari

when bad things happen in life

and when you want to cry inside

when there is no word left to say

and when there is no one to hug

when you feel lonely inside

and when you smile with the sweetest smile

when you run away from your soul

and when you don't want to listen to your heart

when you can't stand this life

and when you start to ask questions about life...

these 'when's will never end

but make sure you won't have any regrets at the end.

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@bernardtwindwil thank you so much sir! this means a lot to me!

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You wrote a beautiful poem. You can make no mistakes in poetry. This poem was meaningful. The message was important to just about any young person. Great work!!!