when you write a poem about 'stars'

asesarihelp the earth
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what am i dooooing...

when you write a poem about 'stars'

by asesari

i thought like...

maybe i should have written a poem about 'stars in poems' rather than a poem about stars

stars... how beautiful they are!

you can use them for a love poem, for a poem about death, or infinity...

they are white points on a black paper

they are perfect for a poem about hope, and they motivate you so well!

they make you think about life

your mistakes and dreams

i mean... that's amazing

a muse a star, right?

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10 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil :) I am glad you find it clever! Thank you!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
You have my vote. This was clever and intelligent. The wording was so graphic you did not need the pictures. Great star poem!!!