If only...Maybe then...
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arisleydisHaii everyone
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If only...Maybe then...

by Arisleydis

If only you never got together with him

Maybe then would we would be happier family

If only he would have stayed away

Maybe then we wouldn't have been far away from you

If only he never made you happy

Maybe then we would have been able to fill your heart instead

If only he was the man you wanted him to be

Maybe then we would have given him the chance

If only you would see what we see

Maybe then you wouldn't be so confused on how this happened

If only you weren't so afraid

Maybe then we can build this bridge

If only we weren't so shattered

Maybe then we could find how to be connected once again

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This was a pretty poem of free verse. It was also a powerful left hook. Your verses were incredibly evocative. It could use proofreading. Other than that I think this puts the reader on an emotional roller coaster. Great poem!!!