Heart Adrift
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ameagamiCommunity member
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago

Heart Adrift

by ameagami

Love is blind So I never saw the signs That said this love is only in my mind

Love is pain So I endured when you betrayed And endured when you ignored my complaint

Love is in the air But why my search for it always fail I can't seem to find any of its forms or shapes I can't find it anywhere

Home is where the heart is Maybe that's why I feel lost and adrift Cause no home welcomed my heart in 

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ameagamiBronze CommaCommunity member
6 months ago
That wasn't love

ameagamiBronze CommaCommunity member
a year ago
Type Title Here

ameagamiBronze CommaCommunity member
6 months ago
No losers among us

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Plaintive, sad expression of a lost soul. Well actually a heart adrift. This was well written. I would like to see a little more structure. Don't change your wording just minor rearrangement. Good poem..