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allllllieeExpressing myself with words 📖
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by alllllliee

When you left,

I cried externally.

The tears fell out like an ocean in my eyes,

The pain was taken out on my wrist ,

And I was told it was dumb to be this upset about a "stupid boy" ,

So I tried to be happy. And I acted as happy as I could

But I was still crying and I was still in pain and I was still dying.

But no one could see it ,

No one could hear it,

It became internal.

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This is raw and powerful. You wrote in such a way that you compelled me to imagine some pretty vivid scenes. great job!!!