My life right now is a train ride

aliciamay97words are lines we shape with feelings
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My life right now is a train ride

But I'm just sitting by the window, looking at the way and not getting down.

Sometimes I enjoy the sights, sometimes I get bored

Someone got on the train on the last stop. People get in and out all the time, but he's just standing by the door. I thought for a second he would come and sit by my side, he was looking my way.

But he's just standing by the door. Now he looks away.

I guess he won't be my travel partner after all. I've never had one anyway, but there is something about this person that makes me unable to look away. He notices, but I don't care.

For now, the train is still moving.

I guess I shall just wait and see.

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This is a cool story, as short as it was I enjoyed it!

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Great allegory comparing the train to life itself. Wonderful symbolism through the entire piece. The flow is smooth with no tumultuous issues to detract from the lyricism of the words. The words were well chosen to umpart your theme to the reader. This was an excellent effort.

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