He is the one....
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alanad Goodbye Commamates ....Be Right Back ❤️
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A freeverse for a person on commaful.

He is the one....

As I stepped into this world of poetry,

As I stepped into this world of poetry, I could see display of unique pieces,

As I stepped into this world of poetry, I could see display of unique pieces, As I went through their lines,

As I stepped into this world of poetry, I could see display of unique pieces, As I went through their lines, My confidence level took a leave.

I asked myself to leave this platform,

I asked myself to leave this platform, It was not made for a kid like me,

I asked myself to leave this platform, It was not made for a kid like me, But after thinking deep and thrice,

I asked myself to leave this platform, It was not made for a kid like me, But after thinking deep and thrice, I displayed a small simple glance.

After waiting so patiently,

After waiting so patiently, A comment popped in front of my eyes,

After waiting so patiently, A comment popped in front of my eyes, His comment encouraged me so much.

After waiting so patiently, A comment popped in front of my eyes, His comment encouraged me so much. That confidence and bliss came to a position.

He saw a potential in me,

He saw a potential in me, He was the first one to encourage me,

He saw a potential in me, He was the first one to encourage me, His words were so magical,

He saw a potential in me, He was the first one to encourage me, His words were so magical, That I couldn’t leave my pen.

Slowly and gradually, I started blending with him,

Slowly and gradually, I started blending with him, I started treating him like my big brother,

Slowly and gradually, I started blending with him, I started treating him like my big brother, I also titled him as my mentor,

Slowly and gradually, I started blending with him, I started treating him like my big brother, I also titled him as my mentor, Who teaches with so much perfection.

I have never seen a legend like him,

I have never seen a legend like him, With so much talent and confidence,

I have never seen a legend like him, With so much talent and confidence, His support always stays in my heart,

I have never seen a legend like him, With so much talent and confidence, His support always stays in my heart, His talks always display love and respect.

His honesty and teachings,

His honesty and teachings, Makes me focus more on my pieces,

His honesty and teachings, Makes me focus more on my pieces, Why is there a lack?

His honesty and teachings, Makes me focus more on my pieces, Why is there a lack? Of such legendary people?

I always share my thoughts with him,

I always share my thoughts with him, Cause I feel comfortable and relaxed,

I always share my thoughts with him, Cause I feel comfortable and relaxed, I would like to remind you again,

I always share my thoughts with him, Cause I feel comfortable and relaxed, I would like to remind you again, It’s tough to find a unique person like him

Hmm......You must be thinking who exactly that person is.

Hmm......You must be thinking who exactly that person is. If you’re thinking it’s @clichepenname, then you’re correct.

Hmm......You must be thinking who exactly that person is. If you’re thinking it’s @clichepenname, then you’re correct. I always wanted to write something about him but I used to stop. I thought it would be really embarrassing for me and him.

But I wanted to show how amazing he is. His support is the best after my family. He is a true legend. A super talented and busy brother (LOL) Love you brother. You will always stay the best bro. for me.

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