Magic
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adritadroyI am a lover of language, are you?
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Magic

by adritadroy

In search of a divorce from this world,

I had bumped into you.

You were not of my colour; you did not belong to my caste, nor my race.

You were an alien, not from this world.

Love is for the eccentrics

I believed until I saw that the world of love had you.

This world,

which I was quite oblivious to earlier, merged mystery pain serenity fear hurt interest inquisitiveness all into one; this world did not thrive on one emotion at a time.

This world collapsed and reformed a billion times each day.

These are the starting lines to a story I am working on.

Please tell me how you feel about them. I will be waiting for your comments eagerly.

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adritadroyBronze CommaI am a lover of language, are you?
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@bernardtwindwil this one is going to be lengthy so you will have to wait, sorry. I'm ecstatic to see your reaction though! @lentis thank you so much.

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Loved it. I am hooked already. OK, now you have a response. I can't wait to see the rest of the story. Beautiful prose deserves​ an ending

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a year agoReply
sounds like a good start :) i like it!