Loneliness
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adelinefeckerDeep thoughts over coffee...
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Prose <3

Loneliness

Prose by adelinefecker

It felt a lot like flying through space

It was not serene

You are moving at the speed of light

Going around and around

And you keep hoping

That there is someone out there in the blackness that you can hold onto. Slow yourself down.

And when you find it

You want to hold on and never let go.

But there is nothing

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9 months agoReply
@felonious @bernardtwindwil Thank you both! <3

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
I loved your word choice and combination of static and dynamic thinking. I have long wondered about the speed of light. Does time stand still? You did a wonderful job describing your impression. Great essay!!!

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9 months agoReply
i love this

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9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
Oh, very plaintive and surreal. I loved it. Your journey was very well written. The forlorn feeling of being disconnected was well conveyed. Great job!!!!!