Fire
  6 likes
  •   6 comments
Share

adelinefeckerDeep thoughts over coffee...
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago
Short thought that popped into my head about a boy I used to love...

Fire

Prose by adelinefecker

He was one of those people.

The wild kind.

The kind that seemed too big for his body.

The kind that never stopped burning and burning.

I thought I liked fire

I liked feeling warm and alive with him because it was so hard to feel those things alone.

I still smell his smoke on me.

A reminder of everything that we lost when we decided to mix.

Fire and ice.

We were an eruption of unnatural elements, never meant to touch. How could I fall in love with fire?

How could I let him melt me down

Until there was nothing left of me

Until there was only fire.

Please Like/Comment <3

Stories We Think You'll Love
adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
6 months ago
Love
Just something I whipped up for the special day!

adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
a year ago
I will learn Part 1
I will learn (Part 1) by Adeline Fecker... to be c...

adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
a year ago
I am a grown up
I am a grown up- spoken word by Adeline Fecker



adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
a year agoReply
@ginaschultz Thank you so much!!

ginaschultzstill searching for my purpose
a year agoReply
I love this! I understand the meaning on spiritual level, trust me. Great job :)

adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Opposites attract but they don't last that's for sure! Thanks for reading!

adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
a year agoReply
@sydney Thank youuuu!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Yeah, that's the way it is a lot of times. Shared temperament is so important in a relationship. This was beautifully written. I too like the fire and ice allusions. Great Poem!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
I love how you use fire and ice as symbols. Great post! 🔥❄️