Fall down
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adelinefeckerDeep thoughts over coffee...
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A short poem <3 Sorry I have not posted in a while! Midterms have been keeping me busy!

Fall down

Poetry by adelinefecker

Just as

Dusk is falling on me

I become weak

Just as

His weight became too much

I felt the stifiling lonely

Falling on me

Just as

The wind blows

And dusk falls down

People leave.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
Thank you for coming home. I love your mellifluous poems. The lyrical descriptions are begging to be set to music. Great work!!!!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
10 months agoReply
@adelinefecker haha yay!

adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
10 months agoReply
@sydney Not too bad, but they required A LOT of studying! I'm glad to be done now :P

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
10 months agoReply
how were midterms? :)